MUSIC MAGAZINE Target Audience Feedback

I asked my peers in my class to look at my first draft of my music magazine and write down the feedback on a piece of paper. I then Analysed the feedback given and made the changes to my front cover to complete my second draft.

Here is my initial Feedback..

1.No issue number or date.
2.Need social media, Masthead is hard to see with models dark hair.
3.Different font for cover lines.
4.Need social media icons and make it look more music magazine related.
5.More colour needed in coverlines.
6. Own image, different font for mini coverlines.
7.Not black Masthead.
8.No skyline.
9.More colours, Price, Social Media.
10.Own Photo needed.

Based on the feedback from my peers in my media studies class, I have furthered my first draft and applied the changes to make my first draft of my front cover to convey my second draft. I think this draft with the changes applied looks far more realistic than the first, thanks to my target audience feedback.